Thursday, April 26, 2012

Fantasy Story with Spence

Sorry for the lack of story posting. Life got away with me, and between that and the fact that I can't seem to perfect Chapter 1 to my satisfaction, I still haven't gotten around to finishing it. It will come... eventually.

So to fill the void, one of my coworkers and I started this crazy story idea. Enjoy.


Fantasy Story
By Alyssia and Spencer

            Cora followed a large man into the tavern, keeping close behind him so as not to attract attention to herself upon entering. The man yelled at some men he knew as he burst through the door, drawing the majority of the room’s attention to him, and giving her the perfect opportunity to slip into the shadows unnoticed. She normally made it a point to avoid taverns. They were loud and full of big, burly, drunk, stupid men, and they tended to smell. Whenever she ventured into one, trouble always found her. She was wanted in at least four different provinces, and the fact that she was easily distinguishable by the large scar that ran across her eye and down her cheek to the back of her neck didn’t help to keep her hidden. After a few drunk guards had recognized her defining mark in the midst of a tavern and she had barely made her escape with her life, she did all she could to stay away from them.
            But today she was here for a bounty of her own. There was a man—or so she had heard—who was wanted for the murder of a high-ranking palace guard. The bounty on his head was 800 gold coins, a reward unlike any she had ever heard of. According to the rumors, he liked to have drinks here, and occasionally some of the women, too. Her plan was to lie low until he inevitably arrived, wait until he was very drunk, then lure him up to an empty room and cap him before he knew he’d been duped. She had befriended a local salesman who had agreed to turn in the body for her, and then the two of them would split the reward 50/50.
            There was just one problem. When he entered the tavern, he was not alone. And he and his friends were already drunk. And they were too busy kicking and punching and throwing a thin man to the ground to bother sitting back and thinking about other pleasures.
            At first Cora just ignored the fighting. It would settle down, eventually. But when a chair was thrown straight at her face, forcing her to move quickly to avoid being hit, which knocked back the hood of her cloak and revealed her face to the whole tavern, she decided to keep moving. One of the men not involved in the fighting recognized her immediately and smirked. She didn’t like his smug look. So now it was fight or flight.
            She moved for the door. But something—a bottle she supposed, from the sound of glass smashing into pieces—slammed into the back of her head. Very well. A fight it was.
            She pressed her fingers to the clasp at her throat, shedding her cloak completely, while bending to retrieve the dagger from her high boot. She rose and half spun, half launched herself into the nearest brawler. The blade was only four inches long, but it took down the man three times her size when she jammed it into his leg. Still dripping blood, the blade sliced the arm of the second-closest man, then vanished into his side. Only four more men to go.
            The next closest man saw her coming and knocked the blade from her hand, but it didn’t matter. She took advantage of his lack of speed and her small frame, slipping under his wide stance and taking his own blade from his belt and sticking it into his back.
            She was turning to the next brawler when large arms clasped around her middle. The man who had recognized her had not given up on the idea of turning her in, apparently. His grip was tight, and she couldn’t even slip out of it. In the midst of her flailing, her fingers grasped the handle of a mug, and she used it to first smack her captor in the face, and when his grip loosened just enough she pulled her hips away and kicked backward, hoping to hit just below the belt.
            Her aim must have been true, for the man’s arms immediately released her and a string of curses boomed from the man’s mouth. She whirled on him and smacked him generously against the back of the head with the mug until she knew he would be out of the fight for good.
            The remaining three brawlers still had not noticed her, but the rest of the tavern had. She threw hot, penetrating stares at anyone who dared to glance her way, her witchy blue eyes piercing into their souls. They shuddered and looked away.
            Once her knife was back in her hands, she threw her rage on the remaining three troublemakers. The one closest to her went down with a puncture to the knee. The second went down with a mug to the groin. And the third—he was the one with the 800 gold coin bounty on his head—he stared at her with wide eyes and stepped back the moment he realized his friends were no longer part of the fight.
            Cora thought about knocking him out too, but there was no point. He had backed down from the fight. And the local salesman who was supposed to come pick up his unconscious form from one of the empty upstairs rooms would never know to find him here in the main room, nor would he know how to distinguish him from the other six men who either lay silent or groaning on the floor.
            The thin man the brawlers had been picking on moaned and held his hand to his profusely bleeding nose. “What’d you do that for?” he asked, his voice muffled by his hand.
            Cora paused. What had she done that for? She hadn’t planned on saving the weakling. She had been thrown into the fight. But now that she was standing here, she felt almost like she had continued fighting to get to him, to stop the men who inflicted his pain. It felt good to be a hero for once, instead of a thief, a liar, a threat, a villain.
            But then the strange phrasing of his reflection of gratitude hit her like a sack of bricks. “What do you mean, ‘what’d I do that for’?” she snapped, kicking the underside of his worn-down boot mockingly. “I just saved your life. Show some more respect.”
            The man with the 800 gold coin bounty on his head twitched. Cora noticed it out of the corner of her eye, and spent no time hesitating to find out why. Just as he lifted a blade above his head to strike her, she spun hers into his stomach. He doubled over and fell backward onto one of his companions.
            The thin man on the floor struggled to his feet. Holding his nose didn’t help, much. It was bleeding right through his fingers. Sighing, Cora pulled a small strip of cloth from her bosom and handed it to him. He gratefully pushed the fabric to his face.
            Sometime between the time Cora had defeated the man who wanted to turn her in and the time she had rescued the weakling, the rest of the room had gone silent, but she only noticed it now that she was pondering what to do next. The stares bored heavy on her now, and she longed more than anything to rid herself of their criticism. Turning suddenly, she fetched her cloak from the floor, then her blade from the bulging stomach of the man whom she decided not to turn in after all, grabbed the arm of the nose-bleeder before she really thought about what she was doing, then turned for the door and ran.
            “Where are we going?” the nose-bleeder asked, stumbling from the bruises and fractured bones he no likely had suffered during his beating.
            She didn’t know, so she didn’t reply. She only knew it was time to escape, time to flee. She slipped between carts and stands, around buildings, past God knew how many people. Despite having only been in the city a day, she knew how to navigate it well. Before long they were hidden in shadows, beside a slow flowing stream of sewage, safe from anyone who may want her.
            The nose-bleeder panted heavily, unused to running, and collapsed on the ground, but slunk away from the fowl water. “It stinks here,” he muttered through the now red cloth he still held to his face.
            Cora looked down at him and smiled. At least he was funny. “How is your nose?” she asked, bending down to him. “Is it still bleeding?”
            He pulled the cloth away from his face, and a stream of red fell to his shirt.
            “Here.” She reached under her skirts and ripped off a new strip of cloth from her under dress. “Lay back against this rock and try to breathe slowly. You’ll need to slow down your heart rate if you want the blood flow to slow and your nose to stop bleeding.”
            He leaned back and let her switch the fully soaked cloth for the clean one, then watched as she dropped it into the water and let it travel slowly along with the rest of the trash. “I’m John,” he spoke suddenly, although with the cloth smashed to his face it sounded like “I’mb Jobn.”
            “Cora,” she replied, looking him quickly over for any twisted limbs. “How are you feeling?”
            “Bmy stombach ‘urts.”
            She lifted his shirt and frowned at the number of bruises left on his skin. But when she pressed her fingers gently to his chest, she found no broken bones. That was good. With any luck, after his nose stopped bleeding she could lead him back to a main part of town and then vanish back into the forest in search of new wanted posters. “You’ll be sore for a few days, but you’re okay.”
            “Your fingbers tickle.”
            Cora smiled. She was beginning to like this pathetic, beat up man’s company. Maybe she wouldn’t leave him behind, after all.

Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Virtual Reality Prologue


     The Dark Ruler reached out his hand and tested his power once again on the far wall, shooting a ball of flame from his palm. It crashed against the stone and licked out at the air in a wide circle before fading away, leaving him in darkness. Again he waved his hand, and another ball of fire left his palm. The flames crackled and sizzled as they died away against the stone.
     He was growing more powerful. But there was always room to grow. He wanted more power, more magic. It wouldn’t take much for him to finally be able to achieve the ability to transform, that one wondrous trick that always eluded him. He had been stretching himself, studying every book on magic that he could get his hands on, roaming the worlds in search of a source of power that he could overtake in order to finally grasp the talents of his ancestors.
     Widening his stance and waving his hands around each other, palms toward the floor, he stirred up a small whirlwind and sent it spiraling toward the stone wall, then shot out another ball of flame so that it slipped through the top of the whirlwind and spat out the bottom. The flames increased as the air swept around it, and the explosion on the stone shook the floor. The Dark Ruler smiled. There were few in the realm who could match him in power, and none, he was confident, who could best him. The few people who had any chances of beating him in a one-on-one battle were on his side, so he had nothing to fear.
     Deciding to stretch himself a bit, he reached to the ceiling and curled his fingers. Sparks of lightning licked at the air above him. Making their intensity grow, he reached out his other hand to the floor. Small pools of water began to form at his feet. Carefully controlling the lightning, which sparked out wildly against the ceiling, he brought the electricity down toward the water.
     The impact shook the entire room and smoke filled the air. He swept it away with his hand and smiled down at the dark stain on the floor where lightning had zapped the water, instantly causing it to evaporate into steam and smoke.
     Just then the doors to his right burst open, and seven teenage boys filed in. The leader, Korigan, held a small wire cage in one hand, which he swung carelessly back and forth to match his long stride. He had a smirk on his face that the Dark Ruler wanted to smack right off of him. Even though Korigan was annoying and had an attitude problem, he was useful for certain things around the Base, like getting rid of people quietly. He was the messenger boy, the assassin, the minion. He was useful at times, but for the most part he just got in the way.
     “Get out, Korigan,” the Dark Ruler demanded, causing electric sparks to spring from his hand. “Or I’ll use you as a target.”
     Korigan stopped in mid step, the smirk falling from his lips. His deep red eyes still held their glisten, revealing the hint of rebellion he still held within him. He showed no fear as he objected, “You’re going to want to hear what I came here for.”
     “It can wait,” the Dark Ruler replied curtly. The electricity in his palm intensified. “Get out.”
     “It’s a gift from your wife,” Korigan continued, ignoring him completely. “She said to tell you that your search is over.”
     Lifting an eyebrow with mild interest, the lightning faded away. Korigan waved his hand to keep his friends back, then joined the Dark Ruler at the center of the room and held up the cage for him. “Be grateful that I’m loyal to you, Tokala,” he spat, shooting the Dark Ruler a dirty look. “I almost took it for myself.”
     Tokala snatched the cage from Korigan’s grasp and peered inside. Clinging to one of the thin bars, shaking with each motion of the cage, hung a butterfly with a wingspan twice the length of his hand. Its wings reflected every color imaginable, and sparkled with a mild shimmer as they caught the low lighting of the candles lining the walls. It radiated a mild glow, one that flickered as if in fear.
     Laughter bubbled from deep within the Dark Ruler’s chest. This was what he had been searching for all these years. This was the source of magic he needed to finally be able to transform. This was the end of his search.
     Korigan took a nervous step back as Tokala’s laughter echoed through the practice hall. “Ha!” he cried. “I have been waiting a long time to meet you, butterfly.”
     “What are you going to do with me?” a young voice cried, barely audible in the midst of the laughter.
     Tokala lifted the cage closer to his face and peered inside. “You talk?”
     “Of course I do!” the butterfly cried, his voice breaking with fear. “I’m no ordinary butterfly, you know.”
     “Oh, is that so?”
     “Yes. And… um… If you don’t let me go, bad things will happen to you.”
     “I seriously doubt that,” Tokala grinned.
     “Please just let me go,” the butterfly begged, its wings fluttering. “I was just looking for my friend, and I took a wrong turn in Cavern Hole and the next thing I knew I was in this cage…”
     “Well that’s what you get for venturing down into Cavern Hole,” Tokala laughed. “That place isn’t the wonderful garden that you came from. It’s a dark and desolate series of tunnels that lead to only one thing: my wife.”
     The butterfly shuddered. Its wings fluttered, cascading specks of light down upon the bottom of the cage. “She was a horrible woman.”
     “Yes, that’s why I married her.” Chuckling to himself, the Dark Ruler opened the door to the cage and reached his hand inside. The butterfly squealed in protest and hopped from one bar to another until it was as far away from the cage door as it could go, but there was no escape. Tokala wrapped a cloud of his dark power around it and drew it from its cage, watching it wriggle and writhe within a bubble of dark grey fog.
     “What did I do wrong?” the butterfly cried, its body shaking as it began to sob. “Please don’t eat me. I’m not an ordinary butterfly, I’m not just made of pure magic, its so much worse than you think.”
     “Oh, don’t worry, my pet,” Tokala smirked. “I won’t hurt you. Much.”
     “Please stop! You’ll be committing murder!”
     “It wouldn’t be the first time.”
     The butterfly thrashed within the confines of the smoky bubble, but its efforts were fruitless. There was nothing it could do to escape. However powerful this remarkable source of magic was, Tokala was much more powerful.
      Mesmerized, Korigan watched with wide eyes as his Dark Ruler brought the trapped butterfly to his chest and pressed the bubble against his black armor. The smoke absorbed into his chest, and the butterfly with it. The sharp piercing cry of the butterfly’s pain hovered in the air moments after its colorful wings had vanished.
     Taking a deep breath, Tokala closed his eyes. “Oh, yes,” he breathed in satisfaction.
     As the Dark Ruler began to emit a soft orange glow, Korigan backed up nervously, keeping his eyes on the powerful man in the center of the room. “Let’s get out of here,” he whispered to his comrades. Without objection, they followed him from the room and shut the doors behind them.
     Pity they didn’t stay, Tokala thought to himself. They’re missing the show.
     Drawing on the newly absorbed power within him, Tokala pictured himself growing. Smoke flooded the ground as he gradually grew in size until his head nearly touched the ceiling three stories tall. His arms and legs began to fatten up, and his black armor and robes molded into shimmering scales. When he opened his eyes, Tokala was a dragon.
     Spilling waves of laughter from his scaly jaws, the Dark Ruler crushed the cage that had once held the butterfly, smiling at the crunching sound it made from underneath his enormous foot. For good measure, he spat a ball of fire from his mouth, lighting up the room with the brightest flames he had ever created. Oh yes, this power was well worth the wait he had been forced to endure.
     And now that his wait for it was over, it was time to turn his time and attention to more important things in life, such as taking over the realm one world at a time. He would turn those bright and happy worlds into a single dark existence, just as his ancestors had sought to do.
     The only thing powerful enough to bring him down was the Ultimate wielder. But there had been no wielder in the realm for thousands of years. There was nothing to fear. There was only success ahead of him.
     As he returned back to his human form, Tokala sighed peacefully. Everything was going his way.

Thursday, January 19, 2012

Explainations

     Hey guys! I thought that as a first posting, I might want to explain why it is I created this blog and what I plan to use it for. I have been writing off and on since high school, but as life has pulled much of my attention away from my writing recently, I wanted to set up something that would require me to stay committed to my stories so that I didn't spend years away from them and never finish any of my ideas. I figured that a blog would keep me committed to writing at least once a week, even if it was something small.
     Because this is a blog, writing longer stories would not really be a good idea unless I broke them up into pieces to keep the posts smaller and easier to commit to writing. So I decided that I would start writing serial stories and post them chapter by chapter on this blog. I figured that wouldn't be a terrible idea; I once heard that that's how Mark Twain got his start in writting. If it worked for him, why not for me?
      And because I wanted a silly play-on-words type of title, I figured I'd go with my idea to write my stories in serial format and put up a picture of a bowl of cereal (haha, serial, cereal, get it? Don't care? Oh well, I thought it was cute). So that's why this blog is called Sugary Serial. In case you were wondering. (Still don't care? Then why are you still reading this?)
     I plan to start with a story many of my friends have already read, one that I've been working on for at least six years and still needs some work. As I edit it chapter by chapter, I'll post the new and updated version of it up here on the blog. I've already had it copyrighted by law, so publishing it someday could be a struggle anyway; it seemed like the perfect story to start publicly writing with, since it is so close to my heart.
     Hopefully I'll be able to post something every week. I welcome comments, but please make them kind and constructive criticisms.
     Enjoy!!